-Changing the background colour from white to purple
-Adding another picture on the bottom right hand side which has been edited on Adobe Photoshop
-Changing the issue number and date's colour and background and the position of it
-Adding a website address at the bottom of the page
-Changed the 'Tuned In' titles position to the top left
- Edited the main big picture to change the brightness and took away the shadows
- Took off the logo
- Took away the picture on the left and replaced it by the title
I done them improvements to make the magazine front cover look more professional.
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This is my contents page, the improvements i made since my last draft are;
-Making the top picture of the three girls smaller to make it look neater
-I added the guitar picture and a caption to it to take up more room and fill the blank space
-Moved the 'suscribe' box to the bottom of the page
This is the first of the double pages of my music magazine. Since my first draft the improvements that i have made are;
-I changed the whole storyline and the characters from two boys, to two girls
-Added a main title next to the picture
- Kept the idea of a fake tweet but changed it to match the storyline
-Took away the logo from this page to create space
-Took out the arrow and the caption that was on the top of the page
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-Edited it more in photoshop by filling it dodgy editing work
-Rounding off the edges of the outline of the photo
I havent done much improving on this page because there wasnt much i needed to do. The two double pages relate to eachother because the story on the left, matches the person or 'celebrity' in the poster on the right.