Second draft completed

This is my second draft of my front page for my music magazine. The improvements i have made since my first draft are;
-Changing the background colour from white to purple
-Adding another picture on the bottom right hand side which has been edited on Adobe Photoshop
-Changing the issue number and date's colour and background and the position of it
-Adding a website address at the bottom of the page
-Changed the 'Tuned In' titles position to the top left
- Edited the main big picture to change the brightness and took away the shadows
- Took off the logo
- Took away the picture on the left and replaced it by the title



I done them improvements to make the magazine front cover look more professional.





This is my contents page, the improvements i made since my last draft are;
-Making the top picture of the three girls smaller to make it look neater
-I added the guitar picture and a caption to it to take up more room and fill the blank space
-Moved the 'suscribe' box to the bottom of the page

This is the first of the double pages of my music magazine. Since my first draft the improvements that i have made are;
-I changed the whole storyline and the characters from two boys, to two girls
-Added a main title next to the picture
- Kept the idea of a fake tweet but changed it to match the storyline
-Took away the logo from this page to create space
-Took out the arrow and the caption that was on the top of the page








This is my second of my double page spread and the final page of my music magazine. The improvements since my first draft are;
-Edited it more in photoshop by filling it dodgy editing work
-Rounding off the edges of the outline of the photo

I havent done much improving on this page because there wasnt much i needed to do. The two double pages relate to eachother because the story on the left, matches the person or 'celebrity' in the poster on the right.