This is my draft for my front page of my magazine, i have picked these colours because it blends in with the bottom of the picture at the school which is across the top of the page. I've made sure i've included at least 4 pictures over the 2 pages (cover and contents page).
Contents page
On my draft for the contents page for my magazine, its included the contents text of what will include inside, pictures giving hints and examples of different stories, with captions underneath which relates to the page number and which story it will be on. I did not want to overload the page with a lot of information and pictures, so i kept it simple.
Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your first draft of your preliminary exercise. I think it shows the start of a good product.
I'd like you to work on the following:
1. Make sure you have a shot of a student in medium close up on the cover, as specified in the brief.
2. Include more text, particularly on the contents page. It shouldn't just be a list of what will be in the magazine - it should include more information on some of the articles.
3. Work on your pictures to make sure they look more professional. I like the RHS shot - but it looks very similar to the one on the school website. Did you take it yourself?
Thank you for your hard work and for meeting the deadline.