Front cover and contents page draft 2

This is my second draft of my Front page of my school magazine. The changes i made to it this time are 

-added a picture of a student in midshot, i made this change so it met the brief
-I moved the date of the magazine to the top, i did this to make more space at the bottom of the page
-I moved the issue number to the right hand side, also to make more space for added text
-I added a caption to the picture of the student in midshot, i done this to give some more information about a article.

This is my second draft of my Contents page for my school magazine, this time the changes i made was 

-I added more text under the picture on the right hand side, i done this so it gives some more information on the article 
- I cropped the picture on the top a bit so it gave more space to spread out pictures and text
- I also added text to both captions under the pictures on the right, which can attract the audience even more and make them buy the magazine


I still need to make my pictures look more professional on both pages and maybe even change a few to make them relate to the stories more.