Final draft of my music magazine completed

This is my final draft of my music magazine front cover. I have made many changes

between the second draft and this one such as;
-changing the background colour from purple, to now just the image background which is a grey colour
- changing the main picture on the front completely from a boy and a girl, to a single girl on her own
- changed the main title 'Tuned in' from blue to pink and made the font thinner and more professional
-added text such as '100% exclusive!' and a quote from 'Rachel' which the story carries on inside
-added a banner along the top with text saying 'the 10 biggest music moments of 2012 inside!'
-added a logo that appears on the front cover and contents page
- put a circle shape around the price
- Added a yellow box on the left hand side of the front cover that advertises makeup products
- Added a circle shape that persuades the reader with 'Your instant makeover'
-put more and new images on the page with a coloured border to make them stand out and fill up space


I made these changes to make my music magazine look more professional and similar to a real magazine that is bought in shops.


This is my final draft of my contents page of my music magazine. I have made changes to the contents page to make it look neater and better presented, such as;

-changed the main image at the top of the page to a more relevant topic and to vary the stories in the magazine
- I edited the picture of the guitar (cut around it and made it brighter) so it blends with the page background
- Added a text box at the bottom which informs the reader about more information regarding the competition to 'win a guitar'
- Added the logo that appears on the front page onto this page too to represent the magazine more
- Added a page number at the bottom
- Adjusted the text layout in the blue box to make it straight and neat

This is my first page of my double page spread inside my music magazine. Changes i have made from the second draft are;
- Changed the text box that has 'EXCLUSIVE CELEBRITY GOSSIP!' from black to pink
-Changed the font of the headline to 'papyrus' to look more professional
- Also added a page number

i havent made many more changes because i didnt think it was needed.







This is my final page of my music magazine, which is my double page spread. The only change i made on this page from my second draft is i added a page number. This is because i wanted to keep it simple and not add too much detail.



Overall, i have improved my music magazine huge amounts since my first draft. All the changes were made to make it look professional, like it was being published, and to make it neat, realistic, eye catching and interesting to read.